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Snake 4 BETTA OR WORSE Bangin Story
- Who can you really trust ?
- Me, Myself, and I
- This story was initially brought about by three of us on MSN one day who felt we wanted to share some of our hardships growing up as teenagers in South London. This story explores the concepts of gangs, sex, drugs, jealousy, friendship, urban schools and much more. We were just 5 girls out on a trip to surrey quays one day and all of sudden from there we decided our lives were worthy enough to begin writing a chain of events we've summarised in this story. Alot of parts of the story are exaggerated, and fictional and fake but the basic notion of the story is real. This is written in colloquial slang and text format.
Check this story as well shes moving fast..her story is sizzzling!! jhiezzz!
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Thankyou to everyone who supported the story from its beggining to end the support has been phenomenal.
I JUST WANT TO SAY THANK YOU TO EVERYONE THAT READ THIS STORY AND HELPED ME WRITE IT BECAUSE AT THE END OF THE DAY...YOU ALL BUILT THIS STORY UP AS MUCH AS I DID...I WANT TO SAY BIG SHOUT OUT TO ALL THE PEOPLE THAT WERE REGULARLY SENDING LOVE AND SUPPORT...ALL THE PEOPLE THAT WERE ALWAYS CHEKING TO SEE NEW CHAPTERS THANKYOU. I JUST WANT TO SAY SORRY FOR THE DELAYS, THIS STORY STRTED IN APRIL AND FINISHED IN NOVEMBER LOOOOOL THIS SHOULD OF BEEN DONE AGES AGO!!! SO APOLOGIES! .
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU...YOU'VE ALL BEEN GREAT. I HOPE YOU ENJOYED THE STORY AS MUCH AS I ENJOYED WRITING IT.I CANT TAKE CREDIT FOR EVERYTHING BECAUSE IT WAS A THREE PERSON STORY TO BEGIN WITH EVEN THOUGH YOU ALL KNOW THAT TOWRDS THE END I WAS ALONE. I DID A LOT OF THIS STORY ON ALONE BUT IM NOT TAKING ALL THE GLORY THE OTHER WRITER WAS SICK! NO LIES THE JOKES THAT YOU HAD FROM CHAPTERS 1-20 WAS PROBABLY MOSTLY HER...YOU WOULD KNOW WHAT CHAPTERS I WOTE AND THOSE I DIDNT....
JUS WANT EVERYONE TO WRITE A LITTLE COMMENT ABOUT THE STORYY JUS SAY WHAT YOU THOUGHT OF IT. BE HONEST ANY NEGATIVE COMMENTS WON'T BE TAKEN TO HEART.
18 Comments 245 weeks
So that’s basically it…r teenage lives ad been madd…lookin back now so much has happened…we lost a frend Shanai…we gained some frends but most ov all we learnt dat life shud b cherished so u shudnt spend all ov ur life on pettiness…live d most ov life nd keep doin wah ur doin…coz u neva relly knw wen its gna end…yer ders gna b times wen u fink why shud I bova ders gna b times wen u fink that’s it I give up…but shud u relly give up...der is always sumfink 2 live 4…children…career…family…everyfink along dem lines…u lot knw wah am on about…We’ve all grown up now most ov us r college or uni…lufaniel changed his life up nd decided 2 bcum a youf worker 4 his local youth club…Roamz…as heart broken as he was 2 find out tomika was cheatin on him…still found a place in his heart 2 4give her…dey live happily sumwher in souf London…Paris hmmm she’s still around many ov u ones mite evn knw her…no long catch her anywer rnd brikki she didn’t end up wiv smallz in d end…dey ended up goin der separate wais she jus wsnt his cup ov tea afta a whyl…specially afta erytink tha appen wiv her nd g.bloodz…Smallz...aaaa HES HEALEDDD!!! Afta tha different miracle he ws able 2 mke a qwik recovery d doctas wer shoked like science has failed dem…but that was basically the truth GOD WORKS WONDERS…he was bk nd redi 4 action cept he laied off dis road ting he saw it wsnt gttin him nywher…srted 2 play his part as father 2 his baby nd strtin working…Shaky…still every1’s common playa...he aint changed…cept now hes sum kinda Jay like d one in kidulthood…Anita…shes CHANGED! Nw I ad 2 put tha in capitals coz she ws strictly on dis GOD ting…no joke she’s gna b in Uni soon…das hw serious she had bcum…mandems wer no longa on er mind…yes she was d X VILLAGE BIKE! EVERY1 WNTED 2 TKE A RIDE..but now…she was nufink 2 b tuched…me…rahhh meee am still ur normal gall…I aint changed…kmt am still wiv da noodle hedd y.chips wah cn sai I slag him off but I love him offff…thas ma life…ive got it set now…all ov r lives changed d minute shanai died…as 4 her killas da galdem da faut dey wer hard…granny next door snitched dem 2 feds…dey still in pen as we speak…sentenced a good 10 yrs 2 d ring leader nd 6 4 d oda gals dah wtched nd didn’t stop it…As much as shanai was a nuiscance as much as she got me mad…she didn’t deserve to die…R.I.P. you will neva b 4gotten….
As for G.Bloodz…smallz didn’t kill his rass but his OWN MANDEM DID!...he’s dead…gt snitched up 2 feds nd eventually killed b4 he cud eva see pen by his own bois hu set him up…wah goes around comes around goes around nd cums all d wai bk around…[[YEAH! Lol]]…
Nd thas it…Snakes 4 betta or worse…der was many in r teenage life…BEWARE OV SNAKES das d basic message ov the story…SNAKES R EVERYWHER! U cn catch dem undercoversss…lurkin around in the grass u gotta b smart coz snakes r smart!...keep it blessed…its 1 love out here…
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Tomika- Yh hello [[crying]]
Raheem- Hello..yo sis was rong
Tomika- [[Sniffs]] I-I-I- need you 2 cum nd pick me up am nt 2 far am rnd ends near d shopping centre
Raheem- Was rong doe…?
Tomika- Can u jus cum nd pick me up plz…[[sniffs]]..hurry yer
Raheem- Aite imma b der in 5 mins still..yer
Tomika- Yer bro…
[[She loksss off]]
Tomika was crying sum ridiculous river ov tears…her face was filled wiv tears wiv sum ov dem hanging frm her chin nd jus abou 2 drop nd hit d ground…Obvii dis was n emosh moment…she jus lost it 2 sum boi she barely evn knws…hu called her whyfee nd didn’t eva whyfee her nd neva intended on whyfee-in her…jhiezzz she ws officially PISSSSSSSSSED!...Das bait loose mvements nd evry Loose chik has her downfall at one point or anoda…4 tomika dis was her first ting nd it ws jus d biggest FLOP!...She called her brother buh wah exactlii was she planning 2 sai…hmmm…
Her brother arrives on point and quickly hops out ov the car nd mkes his wai 2wrds her…he puts his arms rnd her nd accompanies her 2 the car…once der in d car das where he begins 2 tlk…
“No seriously wah appen 2 you” Raheem waits 4 n answer in the drivers seat as he watches continious tears roll dwn her face..he whips as much as he can off nd waits…
“I dnt knw was rong wiv me raheem…I dno wah I was finkin dno wah cme ova me but life is fuked I HATE IT!” she leans 2wrds him nd rests her head on his shoulders
“Allow dis…big man ting! Ive had bre gals ineh so reh am gna ask u a simple qs DID YOU MASH!?” raheem asks bluntly…looks lyk he alredi cloked d situation b4 she evn gt a chance 2 tell him he pulls her bk 2 her original seat nd looks at her
“Arrrrr raheem” she sniffs
“Loook it ain nyfink hard its eiva u mashed or u didn’t…”
“Ur ryt…nd am sorry if I disappointed u..but ive mashed its ova am no longer ur virgin little sister” tomika bursts in2 a flood ov more tears nd raheem jus puts his head dwn 2 d steering wheel ov the car…he ws left speechless…he ws her olda bruda obvii he’s partli 2 blame cah e wsnt settin d best ov examples but at d sme time e always tld her dah mashin wsnt nt n option 4 her…
“How could you open ur legs 2 nxt manz….WHOS DIS BOI IS IT DAH FUKIN EDIATTT I SAW IN D HSE D ODA TYM! HIM YER?” raheem starts shouting in the car nd he bangs a fist to the window in the car…passerby’s r shook finkin hes got sum kinda bizness wiv dem nd dey qwikly take off…
“Na nt evn…its sum nxt boi I met d oda dai he tld me I ws whyfee I ws dis I ws dat…I relly faut he liked me raheem I had feelings 4 him nd 2dai he tkes ma women hood awai nd tells me he has 2 gt sumink 4 his mum…I cum bk 2 his hse avin 4gttin sumtink yer nd all i see is his whyfee nd he gunss me dwn lyk nuffink appen between us…he used me raheeem he used me lyk I was his condom or sumfink” tomika was heavily crying she couldn’t even catch every piece of oxegen the car had 2 provide her wiv…she ws struggling 2 breathe properly…her brother cud relate 2 her coz he had dune tha 2 bare gals it’s a baittt tinggg!...d amount ov anger surgin fru his body at that moment ws emosh…he started the engine..
“Where does he live”
“Naaa its nuffink leave it”
“DNT FUKIN TELL ME 2 LEAVE NUFFINK UR MA LITTLE SISTA! WHERE D FUK DUS HE LIVE” raheem shouted
“I’m jus gna embarrass maself evn mre…please dnt do dis raheem”
“Kmtt…u left ur tings der alie…where goin 2 gt dem back dnt fukin tempt me…give d directions am turning 2 d main road”
Tomika knew she hadn’t gt a word 2 sai…hmm its funny hw d mighty fall…u see dese ppl im dealin wiv…wen dey ws once goin rnd preachin d word dah nxt gals r dis dat nd bre pointing fingas at all dem gals dah wer goin on loose…kmttt ders FAKESSSSSSS nd undercoverss everywhere man! Fuk tha evn ur codee cud b an undie…fuk wah u hearin always recognise wah u see coz das sumfin
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- Nah allow it he has a bby thas ded!!...
- kmtt hes fakeee!! i dont trust him no more...
- Yer coz e ad d decency 2 tell her..tha still mkes him real...
- No sorry am gttin suspicious about him he could be hidin much more...
- No..paris needs 2 move on now its gttin 2 out ov hand
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