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The Asylum Story
- Me, Myself, and I
- The Asylum Story is about a fictional insane asylum called St. Judes'. I wrote the story for an english assignment and decided to put it on bebo.
Please tell me what you think, thanks.
I (finally) got this graded in school, and i got an A for it, which is always good!
Also, check out my other short story, i'm not sure if there's a link somewhere on this page, so here's the URL!
I keep changing my mind about whether to write other stories and what to write about, but when the time comes and i good idea pops into my head ill be sure to jot it down and finally write something ... promise =)!
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Well basically ive had some (rather scary) comments from people who take this way too seriously and actually think this is real.
Now ive clearly stated that it's fiction and any reference to real life places were accidental, i came up with everything on my own without any research into places and people, so if there is an asylum called St. Judes and a place called Kane Hill, it is by accident.
Also, this is a short story ... now ive had some people review this and say ''it shouldv'e bin longer etc etc'' but i can't make a short story long when it's for school as then it would get marked down!
Now i'm not complaining about any of this and i'm not angry but i just want to clear some things up so that people who read this know exactly what they're reading. Not only does this mean that i don't get comments about irrelevent things, but it also means the reader can comment and review about the quality of the story, not the length they wanted it to be!
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