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Holly Berries

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About Me

Me, Myself, and I
Basically, this book is about a 13 year old girl called Holly, who has lived in a 'care home' (orphanage) all her life. She hates her life, so she runs away.
I'm a pretty slow writer, so bear with me ;) ty
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to my fans - thanks for being sooo nice! This is the first book I've done kinda, you know, publicly. In school my 'short stories' were actually 'long stories'. Heh. now I have a chance to write something loooooong. Well thanks for reading it I ℓ٥ﻻﻉ√٥υ all!!

If you have any questions about my slightly confusing story, post them in the comments box thing. I may not be able to answer them, as I'm making some things up as I go along!!

Thanks for all your reviews and comments. I love knowing what everyone thinks! :)

Woohoo! The big one-oh! Ten chapters at last!! Enjoy reading them!!

http://www.bebo.com/ThoughtsFromTheBrink My rubbish poems- read at your own peril!! ;p

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  • Chapter Length

    OK, they're a bit short right now. Well, VERY short. But do you really want to have to read for ten minutes just to finish one chapter?? All right, I'll make a poll. Please vote! Any comments or reviews are great! Thanks!!

    Sarah
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    To get to the album, just click on one of the poll pictures. Although there are only those two pictures right now, there may be more coming! :)

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  • SORRY!!

    Hey guys, sorry about the next chapter taking so long!! My internet broke down, i had a school project to do and i have been SOOOOOO busy shopping and what not. lol :D well, i will finish it when i have more time!! sorry again!!

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  • Mrs Brandon Flowers
    Mrs Brandon Flowers

    the URL for the new version is www.bebo.com/Hollie-Berries-2 there isn't going to be any more story here :(

    10/15/07
  • Mrs Brandon Flowers
    Mrs Brandon Flowers

    Hi, hi, hi. OK, I'm the author -yeah, really- and, well my profile's packed in, soooo, I'm making a new book profile too. You don't have to beleive me, but seriously, there will be no more chapters written here. :(

    10/12/07
  • Saani

    Thats was really good, it captured the brutatility of everyday life, plus your an amazing writer... Love to get a commment from you. tootles ^^

    7/29/07
  • VJ
    VJ

    hey hey ... loving the book!! i have tried 2 add you but.. ur pro is on private so i cant :( hopefully u will read this and maybe add me lol vic

    4/25/07
  • Niamhuss
    Niamhuss

    Love the story so far! Please keep it going hunny! Take Care xxxx

    4/13/07
  • Bryony'
    luv Bryony'

    heyya BAB33 WUBU2??? THATS R33LIII GOOD KK U K33P RITING GOOD LOL soooooo..... ahem enough with the chav talk lol thats reeli good.. btw the blonde one..was it lily?? cant rememba...x anyways... part from da curls she sounds just lyke me LAWL ^_^ ahahahahaha bibi ...x

    4/2/07
  • Katherine
    Katherine

    awsum so far keep going (ps will u rite the script 4 my comic plz :D )

    4/2/07
  • I Brought You Bullets
    I Brought You Bullets

    :O :O :O :O :O :O :O wow thts reli gd, keep writin.

    4/1/07
  • Annie G
    Annie G

    hello again lol. I have another book even though the other isnt finished but oh well http://www.bebo.com/Profile.jsp?Memb... luv annie xxx

    3/31/07
  • Annie G
    Annie G

    ok so you have 2 more fans than me lol. Thanks for becoming a fan lol. luv annie xxx

    3/31/07
  • Annie G
    Annie G

    hello love the new chapter. I know what you mean my 'short stories' were more like novels lol. you should be happy with your fans you've got 3 more than I have lol. we have a fan in common lol.

    3/31/07
  • Annie G
    Annie G

    hey. i've read yours so now you should read mine lol. if you want to the url is .... http://sapphireslife.bebo.com happy reading luv annie :)

    3/19/07